Be yourself Most of the reviews to this flash are senseless.
I noticed one reviewer said that this flash "rips off something else", and that he wouldn't review any further.
People, we review to help the artist out. We don't just point out their imperfections, and then refuse feedback because of it. Have some common decency.
Anyways, yes, I agree with some of the reviewers that the end is extremely abrupt.
Also, it is unclear what is going on. Some people make flash that is completely random on purpose. This looks like it was supposed to have meaning, and just didn't cut it. Nice try, though.
A big mistake I've noticed with flash submissions : they use a song name as the title. Unless it's a music video, or a deep video that the song describes, it won't work. "Be Yourself" doesn't seem to describe this video at all.
Some of the tweening could be fixed as well. When the guy stands up, his ass is actually very angular. It made me chuckle. That could easily be fixed by adjusting the graphic's axis. Nothing huge.
Very nice try though. I'd like to see more from you.
